Parent Interviews - Yearly Reflections
My writing goal is (have you changed it, why?) - Goal- My new writing goal is to... organize related ideas into paragraphs and use linking words and phrases to link some of these paragraphs.
I chose this goal because... I haven’t done it yet I think I should work on this goal because it would be challenging.
I practise this by… I will work on my goal in my writing.
A piece of writing I am proud of is…. The neighborhood bullies, Sean is the biggest bully in Danville Bigger than a bus. Once he lifted a bus with his bare hands. The normal sized kids bought him lunch some days. One day the normal sized children were in the bus on the way to school then Sean picked the bus up and started shaking it. He shook it so hard three children fell out, they looked rather dazed. Sean grabbed a boy by his ankles. His name was Henry Mitchell. He had ginger hair. Sean grabbed the lunchbox and said ‘’ do you have any lunch for me little nerd’’ Henry shuddered ‘’ um, you can have my chicken nuggets’’ ‘’Thanks little nerd’’. Minutes after Big Steve moved into the neighborhood, he said ‘’Hi I’m new’’. Can I smell chicken nuggets. Big Steve wants some chicken nuggets!! ”gulp “ Sean ate the whole lunchbox “Sorry all gone” Big Steve got angry. So he got a humongous pink paint can and tipped it on Sean. “ Oh whoops sorry.”Sean gets really angry. The normal sized children started laughing. “What are you laughing at or you will be next”. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! ”The normal sized kids scattered into the classroom back. The normal sized children had put up with one bullie but now there was two bullies! It was time for the normal sized children to fight back. They had a group huddle and made a plan. One of the boys got a phone and searched up the number for super inflatable chicken nuggets. They ordered a super large crate of inflatable chicken nuggets. About 1 minute later a truck came and delivered the super large box of the super inflatable chicken nuggets. It got dropped off in front of Sean and Big Steve, They gulped all of the chicken nuggets down. Then Sean’s and Big Steve’s tummy’s started blowing up like a big fat Gorilla balloons. One of the normal sized children shouted VOLLEYBALL TIME. Then the normal sized children pushed big Steve and Sean up into the air and they floated into space. They started arguing. about who got them up into space “It's all your fault said Sean”why” because you tipped pink paint on me.” Well if you gave me the chicken nuggets in the first place I wouldn’t of tipped the pink paint on you and the kids wouldn’t of made us blow up like big fat gorilla balloons and we wouldn’t have floated up into space”. “How are we going to get down”? wondered Big Steve. “We will have to work together” said Big Steve “ Ok then hold my hand “ said Sean. So Steve held Sean’s hand and POP!!!!!! Steve and Sean both popped on the satellite. They were like a balloon when you try and blow it up but then you let go and it flies round the room, well they basically flew round the whole world. Finally they got back to school but they were normal sized so they were nice to the normal sized kids but then Big Stewart moved in. Dun dun dun.
In maths I am currently learning (how do you feel about this, what are your next steps? Give your parents a rundown of what we do as well)… - about working together, learning about fractions and doing problems in a group.
Reading - Share your reading work (talk about some of the things you do in reading.) We use cover cards, we were also reading with a buddy after morning tea and lunch. My partner was Bianca and most of the time if there was māroi words we would try to say them.
Do you have any other goals you would like to share, what are you doing to achieve them? My other goal is to work on slope and speech in my writing. I will achieve them by practicing them in my writing And in my spare time
Pick 3 more pieces of work from your blog (write why you are going to share them and what you were learning to do)
-the neighborhood bullies
- lawn mower robot rampage
-the first best day ever.
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