Robot lawnmower fight back

-Goal- -retell a story in my own words Use speech effectively There was a boy named Hemi, his Dad made him mow the lawns that weekend. He absolutely hated it, it really disgusted him. He had better things to do than mow lawns. He could be building a robot, “I got it “ said Hemi. He could build a robot to mow the lawns for him. He went into the shed and got three steak knives, some old scissors, dad's old nose picker , a laser pointer that burns things wherever you point it, a blender, and some guitar strings to tie it all together and finally he gets the old computer. Hemi stayed up all night and worked on his invention. Finally it worked “ it’s alive! KABOOM!!! “Oops still needs a little bit of work”. Finally it actually worked!!! In the morning he programmed it into mowing the lawns for him. Hemi sat in a deck chair and had a soft drink. Before you know it Hemi fell asleep. He woke up to the sound of a group of people screaming. His robot was nowhere to be seen. Dun dun dun. Hemi assumed his robot was making all the commotion. Hemi raced into the city he looked around everyone was bald. When Hemi looked round he saw his robot smashing everything in sight, the robot smashed the statue of the mayor, the circus tent, the zoo, schools, apartments, banks, Keli tarlton's aquarium, Harvey Norman, Noel leeming, centre city, pet shops, the rugby stadium where Jared and William were watching the all blacks vs rabbitohs. Chicken Lala land, (made especially for kiwi, Sky, Daisy and for Mackalya. The lawnmower robot stormed out off the stadium and it to chicken lala land. Luckily The four chickens rushed out Kiwi said to sky Daisy and Mackalya “ stay safe I will be fine” “ok” said Sky Daisy and Mackalya at the same time. So they left. Kiwi went up to the lawnmower robot and whispered “you better watch out” a second later Kiwi started doing karate on the lawn mower robot. She knocked the robots head off got the scissors and chopped the robot's legs off and then Kiwi grabbed the laser and took the arms off the robot and that was the end of that.