11/20/17
The first best day ever!
There was a new boy called William .
He sat in a wheelchair and his wheelchair had super powers like invisibility floatation device and super speed.
William Had a secret panel in his wheelchair .
A elephant had escaped from the circus .
Williams wheelchair isn’t normal it’s invincible.
Goal- choose and write my own stories
Use speech effectively,
Try to use punctuation in my story
Everyone stood iced in fright the students gasped others screamed “AAAAAAAAHHHHH!!! The Principal fainted. William was a new boy, he had a secret button in his wheelchair that will make a secret panel appear, William pushed another button and a microphone popped out onto his lap. William shouted “ get out of my way!” Watch out!”
BREAKING NEWS
Sorry to interrupt A elephant has escaped from the zoo, the Zoo keepers have warned you to watch out
END OF BREAKING NEWS
RING! It’s the school bell for morning tea. William wanted to use a good impression in front of everyone. Suddenly a huge circus elephant raced into the school ground and smashed the golden fence down to the ground. The kids mumbled “ Why couldn’t he have just gone through the front gate!”
William said “ that’s a way that I could make a good impression in front of the whole school”!
“ Watch out otherwise you will be flat as a pancake.” Everyone shuffled back the most popular kid in the school fell into a water trough, “ HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Now he wasn’t popular at all. “I would feel a bit sorry for him” said William. Ok now it is time to save the day! Then William went into action and got his peanut launcher and made a trail back to the circus tent. Then he was the most popular kid at school he was happy!
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